Sunday, April 1, 2012

Resurrection Day

“Worst April Fool’s joke ever.”

One of my favorite scenes (to write) in Entangled was the day Graylee Perez wakes up in her twin sister Charlene’s body. Gray has no idea she died (February 9th) and finds it odd when she wakes up in Charlene’s bed. Her mom is out of town and Charlene isn’t anywhere to be found so Gray goes to school.

Once at McKinley High, Gray is further dismayed when she finds her locker has been emptied. Things get really wacky when she goes to first period and her teacher asks her what she’s doing in his class. When he calls her Charlene she immediately corrects him. However, the information is not well received.

A snippet:

Louder gasps, followed by a rush of whispers coming from all directions. It was like being sucked into the eye of a hurricane with chatter hurled and swirled all around her. Gray looked to Mr. Burke, imploring him with her eyes to make this charade end.
            “Enough!” he shouted and the clamor stopped. Mr. Burke looked at Gray and spoke softly. “Miss Perez, please come with me.”
            Gray stuffed her things inside her pack and vacated her desk. She was more than ready to get out of that room.
            She joined Mr. Burke in the hallway, where he shut the classroom door behind them. Gray could practically hear the jabber begin anew the moment the door clicked in place. Hyenas. She’d like to see how her classmates handled a day in the Twilight Zone. 

1 comment:

  1. I agree :D One of my favorite scenes too -TheUnseelieNerd